Song Of the Aspen
AspenSong of the AspenSay it soft and sibilantlySSSSSSSSong of the ASSSSSSSSSpenLike a breath, a sighShe walks by youAnd her hair swishes in the windShe glances at youAnd a slow smile growsA laugh...
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Well its very very different....but great.....and the Asasazi were a very mysterious people... hope to read it sometime....RB
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jared--i think if you employ some alliteration and assonance in this piece, you would better achieve the sounds you want. they would work better than the repeated SSSSSssss.good luck with both this...
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I think z has made a good suggestion...some alliteration would be a good aproach. Interesting piece Jared
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